Annie's English Story
I was running. I
don’t know what I was running from, or where I was running to, so I
stopped. The cold fingers of Death were
groping for me. My eyes blinded with
tears of fear, I spun around, summoning all of my strength, and sprinted off,
into the blaze of fire in front of me.
Heat. It washed over
me like a wave. I was burning, choking
and gasping for pure air. The fire, it
scorched my throat, charred me to my very core and incinerated my fears. I was scared of nothing. I was slipping through the cracks of a dark
eternity into the depths of a deep abyss.
The paralyzing agony then came.
The excruciating pain, it was white-hot.
It enveloped me, I couldn’t feel anything else as I tumbled into
unconsciousness.
I felt the cooling touch of water. Relief numbed my body. Then, I realised I was trapped: a thick
woollen blanket covered me. I clawed
weakly at its folds. Then the events I
remembered flooded into my mind. The
pain, Death. Oh, what I had done! Suddenly, I had renewed energy, bursting
through what held me. I hobbled toward
the door, until, I spotted my reflection in the mirror. I did vaguely recall in my past life that I
could see energy. I saw a shattered
fragment of light, oddly next to a regularly pulsing, whole light. It was only then I realised there was another
with me.
I was exhausted, my body screaming with pain. I dashed out, unable to take the relentless
questions that would follow.
Delving far into the maze of tunnels, I finally found an
irregular door. Wrenching it open, I
shrieked as darkness swarmed over my vision.
I groggily opened my eyes.
There was Elizabeth, chatting away like she always used to. I let myself sink into the calming
feeling. Wait a minute, I thought, Elizabeth was lost in the…
I realised she was looking at me. A cruel, merciless grin was plastered over
her face. Her eyes widened, then a thud
of a hard object hit my head, I saw stars before passing out once more.
Walls. An enclosed
space surrounded me. I pounded and
battered against the walls. After what
seemed like an age, I heard footsteps.
Not just any footsteps, it sounded like they were pummelling the ground
with thumps that resounded very deep into the earth. I didn’t know whether to feel reassured or
fearful.
The lid above me slid over, and a giant cockroach
materialized out of the fog that instantaneously appeared in front of me. I screamed and clamoured as those petrifying
clicking things hoisted me into the air.
I was terrified of heights; I knew that at least.
Then, what must have been its mouth neared me, coming closer
and closer. I screeched in pure
terror. And it kept coming.
I awoke in a cold sweat.
Thank God, I thought. I turned to
leave – Elizabeth hadn’t taken any chances.
I was still her prisoner.
I love this story. It is absolutely brilliant....it's amazing...i think there is no word in the english language, or any other for that matter, to convey how utterly awesome this story is.
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